Make This Poem Better: “Ursa Major Wakes in January”

Make This Poem Better: "Ursa Major Wakes in January"

It’s back! Last June, I posted a draft of “The Lime-and-Tequila Love Song” as a revision exercise. The idea was to see what different poets would do with a single rough draft … and to give you an exercise in creativity and voice. I was really excited about the response, so we’re back for another round. Like … Read more…

100 Themes Poem: “Death and Pigeons at Dawn”

Death and Pigeons at Dawn

The magic is in the revision. That’s something I had to remind myself about, while writing this poem. You see, the first draft of this was just … so … BLAH. I wrote it in my notebook late at night before bed, and in spite of the “inspired” feeling that started it, it wasn’t as … Read more…